As you see in original picture, light on model comes from in front and from right to left. So it made a shadow of hand on the shawl . To fix it, make two new layers and set the mode to Soft light 100%. I use soft brush with color #fbb7b4 painting on this shadow.

Step 18

We will continue to retouch the shawl and dress. The left part of them need to be brighter to make the light balanced.

Make a new layer and use brush with color #fbb7b4 painting on left side of the shawl. Change the mode to Soft light 100%.

A new layer and I use soft white brush painting on left side of dress. Put it as Soft light 100%:

Step 19

Make a new layer and I set the mode to multipy 50%. I use brush and color #c08373 to paint on model hair to reduce highlight of it.

Step 20

Now we will darken an outer part of umbrella. On a new layer, use brush with color #4aaff1 painting on this part. Change the mode to Multipy 60%.

Make two new layers which are set to Soft light 50% and 100%. Use brush with same color #4aaff1 painting on left outer part of umbrella to brighten it.

Step 21

Now it's time to change color of the shawl . On model layer, use any tools you like to make selection for the shawl. Go to Layer-New Adjustment layer-Channel Mixer and choose Clipping Mask option for this layer. Move this layer on the top of layers.

We have:

Click on layer mask of this Channel Mixer layer to active it's selection. Choose Layer-New Adjustment layer-Selective Color ( Clipping Mask):

Step 22

With same method, I use some adjustment layers to change color of dress.

Channel Mixer

Selective Color:

Color Balance:

Brightness/Contrast:

This is what we have:

Step 23

I use somement adjustment layers to change color of whole picture ( Clipping Mask)

Hue/Saturation:

Selective Color:

Curves:

Hue/Saturation:

Use soft black brush on layer mask of Curves layer to erase face part:

Step 24

Add a new layer with Clipping Mask. I use Blur Tool with 50% strength to soften inside the face avoiding the face stroke:

Step 25

I use soft white brush again to brighten parts of model which catch the light from background. Create a new layer with Soft light mode 50%. Paint on shoulder, arm, dress :